Name: blackballet (Signed) · Date: 04 Dec 2023 08:26 PM · For: Chapter 1

Hi there! Here for a review for the snowlodge event

I really like all  the sibling relationships you have piled up here. It's definitely difficult to balance a large cast but it seems like Cecelia has a strong voice with each of the siblings. I espeiclaly enjoyed her interctions with Ginny and Percy -- it's got to be tough growing up in a house with so many siblings, but it seems like they're really close and have a good, teasing relationship.

I wonder how her relationship with her biological father, Bagman, will come into play. I see from the description that the Triwizrd Tournament will be in this story, so it was a good set-up to have him mentioned in this chapter. I really enjoy Cecelia, and would love to read more about the antics she and the Weasleys get up to!

 

Thanks,

Cat