Name: Felpata_Lupin (Signed) · Date: 19 Mar 2022 04:59 PM · For: teddy getting jealous as fuck

Hey, Branwen! :)

So, I promised myself that I'd visit your AP for rising through the ranks at some point, and I had to start here because, you know... Teddy... :P

And I'm so happy I stopped here because this was so hilarious! Just such a fun read! I enjoyed it a lot! :D

The opening scene with the dinner and Teddy's thoughts when he first saw Victoire, and then the way he was noticing all the interactions between Vic and Gallagher... just so entertaining! Or just, you know, sidled by her - there'd really been enough fucking space. Can't tell you why exactly, but this line made me laugh out loud! I don't know, I just find people being unreasonably jealous so amusing? :P And really, Teddy is being sooooo unreasonable right now! It's so funny!

The texting part was so entertaining too! Teddy keeping being unreasonable and Johanna being like "Mmmh... yeah..." only to vent with Gillian immediately after! Lol! (Honestly, Teddy, grow up a little, am I right? :P Gallagher is just acting with Vic like any boyfriend would? And you can try to tell yourself that you are just being protective or whatever, but you're jealous and that's all there is to it... just saying... :P)

Uhm, I feel like this review is absolutely pointless... just wanted to let you know that I had a lot of fun reading it! Thank you for this little, extremely entertaining one-shot! :D

Big snowball hug,

Chiara

Author's Response:

it's not pointless in that i loved this so much thank youuuu <3