Name: blackballet (Signed) · Date: 27 Feb 2022 03:18 PM · For: Prologue

Hi there, here for a review for the galazy event!

 

Your summary really drew me in! I'm excited to see where you start with this...

 

I love how you start from Harry's POV, thinking about how he caused Fred's death. And he even acknowledges that it's a self-centered thought, but he can't help but still feel guilty for everything </3 And also juxtaposing the funeral with everyone else celebrating the defeat of Voldemort, it's a great first few paragraphs

 

I hate how the reporters still want to talk to Harry, not even leaving him alone for the funeral. This has got to be the saddest part of fame :( I guess it is fairly soon after the defeat, but can't they see it's inappropriate? 

 

And Ginny is totally right, Harry does have a sort of avoidant personality. He never really wants to deal with the things that are bothering him, only things that bother others. Wha ta hero. I'm glad she took the initiative to send McGonagall a letter on Harry's behalf! 

 

I love the way you frame this decision, how it's around Harry atill being focused on everyone else. But from the summary...it looks like that might not be over yet

 

Looking forward to an update!

blackballet