Name: prideofprewett (Signed) · Date: 31 Jan 2021 03:26 AM · For: Chapter 1

Dottie I really love how you characterize the Marauders! I think I've read almost everything on your AP now, and I just have to say that you really get into their minds and explore them so well. I love how you highlight the little details of what Remus' forgets about each of them in the beginning. And his thought process on how Sirius and him would fight is a little sad, but not in an overdramatic sort of way. 

 

The way you depict their feelings for one another is so touching. There's longing and heartache and real love between them. Even after all this time, even in spite of everything. I just love how you convey so much with Remus' internal thoughts here. And his insistence that they share his bed. It felt very them at this moment in time, uncertain of how to move forward in their friendship/relationship and also both just being strong personalities with a tendency to bicker with each other. 

 

I love that they slowly find their way back to one another though. That ending was particularly sweet with them giving into the emotions they've tried to keep at bay. I am a huge sucker for neck kissing in stories. And for cuddling. So naturally everything about that scene had me swooning! Thanks for writing!

 

<3 Courtney 

 

* team ice otter leaving this for the over the bridge challenge *