Name: grumpy cat (Signed) · Date: 20 Feb 2021 11:49 PM · For: Chapter 1

oh no, okay, okay, you said that regulus won't tell, won't out them, but goddd, this little slice of life story started out so nice, with sirius and remus snogging in the library, and it got heated very quickly and remus got distracted by various interesting ideas running through his head but damn, of course someone had to come up on them and discover them snogging. and unfortunately, it was not dumbledore (which, omg, i laughed at mortifying but survivable and now i'm just imagining dumbledore finding them and that akwward conversation that would follow haha) - it was regulus and ugh. i can appreciate they way he was kinda, well, not outright fucking cruel but that he did try and say it in a way that sirius would understand he won't tell, but still, sirius obviously doesn't trust regulus and my heart hurts for him, the fear and anxiety godd.

 

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Name: ShazaLupin (Signed) · Date: 27 Jan 2021 03:43 PM · For: Chapter 1

 

Hi there!

 

Back again! 

 

This started out quite sweet, Remus and Sirius are so great together and it's nice to see fics where they are just being themselves around each other and having fun. Although, it seems quite dangerous to make out in the Library in the first place, especially if they have to have a lookout for it. I suppose they've always been a little reckless though, especially Sirius. 

 

I'm glad Regulus isn't going to tell anyone though, I think it must be hard for him and Sirius. They can't talk to each other like I'm sure they once did and it must be hard to think they're on the opposite side to you. 

 

I guess this isn't the first time Peter's been a traitor lol! I wouldn't' want to be him when they find out why he left them though!

 

Another fab fic! 

 

Shaza

Written for the winter in fairyland review event.

 

Name: prideofprewett (Signed) · Date: 25 Jan 2021 02:44 AM · For: Chapter 1

Whoo Dottie! This starts out so steamy! I love a good make out between the bookstacks scene and you really delievered. I absolutely love Remus' logical thought process as he's making out with Sirius. Seems very Remus hah. I love how you describe what their hands are doing. I think it really shows an urgency to the act and also the fact that their operating over clothes, but still trying to sate one another's desires. And then the moment whenever Regulus catches them is like so intense. We can tell that he's judging Sirius for being gay, specifically for being gay with Remus. And it's so heartwrenching. And the harsh delivery of Regulus' words and how Remus internalizes them and Sirius has to go. Ahh...so much angst. But the goodbye kiss is sweet...the fact that Sirius has to get up on his toes...I swoon for the height difference trope, ok?

 

<3 Courtney 

 

* team ice otter * 

Name: Felpata_Lupin (Signed) · Date: 13 Sep 2020 03:59 PM · For: Chapter 1

Hey, Dottie! Here with a little review for the battleship event! :)

I chose this one because I love the sibling relationship between Regulus and Sirius, so I was curious to see how this would play out!

And... wow... I'm actually not sure how this played out, but it was certinly awkward, and very much what would happen! I think you really nailed all the characters here! (And yes, I know you said in the chapter notes that Regulus is not going to give them away, and I'm totally convinced he won't, but the fact that you let this hung uncertain makes me anxious... :P which goes to show how convincing your writing was, I guess! :P)

The sexual tension in the beginning was so good, btw! And Remus is such a sweetheart, but that's well known... :P I find it kind of hilarious that Peter was supposed to stand guard and he just failed his duties... but that's Peter, I guess? :P

The part that I loved best was when Regulus was just staring at Remus for the longest time and how exposed Remus felt in that moment. I would've given anything for a glimpse of Regulus' thoughts in that moment. Was he just shocked that Sirius was snogging a boy, and a halfblood moreover? Or did he know Remus' secret? Did he actually consider telling his parents? In any case I felt so bad for Remus and Sirius, being caught like that!

This was such a cool piece, I really love your Marauders! I'll need to stop by your AP more often! ;)

Snowball hug,

Chiara