Name: Hawksquill (Signed) · Date: 24 Jan 2021 08:35 PM · For: Lust

This is SUCH a fun premise for a fic, I hope you continue it!  You convey so much in so few words, it's such a fun scene filled with sexy little details - the teasing and him carrying her to bed.  It's interesting seeing a glimpse of a different side to Pansy too, the implication that she enjoys rebelling against her pureblood upbringing. And then the detail that it's a Muggle!  Such interesting implications!  I'd definitely read more about this version of Pansy.

Well done!

**review left for the winter in fairyland event**

Name: prideofprewett (Signed) · Date: 24 Jan 2021 08:30 PM · For: Lust

Ooh this was really intriguing to see someone as prim and proper as Pansy with a Muggle. I love the intensity of this that you build in a short span of time. Like it begins seductively and ends with this heat, but there are also these little moments of levity sprinkled in between. Like with her giggling as the guy tosses her over his shoulder.

 

I'm impressed by how you stir up such vivid imagery and raw emotion with so few words, I think it speaks to your ability as a writer that you're able to do that.  

<3 Courtney

 

* left for the winter in fairyland event, team ice otter * 

Name: magnifique (Signed) · Date: 18 Jul 2020 03:08 PM · For: Lust

oh I really liked how you approached lust here!! It's pretty typical in the sense that it's smut and it's sexy and stuff, but I loved how much more you told of the story by just adding in that last line "Another faceless muggle, another blurry night" - I've always found Pansy to be a character who can be really compelling because we have a very one dimensional view of her thanks to Harry, but for me this really solidified an idea of her as someone who probably has a lot of guilt to work through and shame as well for both how she was raised/her beliefs and now how she is acting out against those beliefs, in such a way that is "out of her control" (in the idea that lust "makes" you do things, which is why it's a sin). 

So I really liked this, I liked how it surprised me (I was honestly expecting it to be like Blaise or Draco so I was very pleasantly surprised in that!) <3