Name: prideofprewett (Signed) · Date: 04 May 2021 07:23 PM · For: Chapter 1

Hi Paula! I am definitely not familiar with this fandom, but I aboslutely don't let that stop me when trying to spread the love on stories that need some love through reviews. <3

 

Paula the way you describe fantasy elements here is so whimsical and fun! I definitely felt the party atmosphere as I was ready this because everything happens so quickly. I think the pacing of your descriptions and introduction of the elements made it feel like I was apart of this celebration. And then the smuttiness was so delightful to read. Your descriptions were sexy, purposeful, and I really felt the agency in spite of them having drunken sex. I am all for a partner being like "Is this ok? We can do this right?" Just makes me swoon everytime. 

 

<3 Courtney