Name: MadiMalfoy (Signed) · Date: 06 May 2020 05:06 AM · For: Chapter 3

Hey Barbara, I’m here with your entry review for my Science Fiction Challenge!

 

While I’ve only seen a few episodes of Stargate SG-1, you do a great job setting everything up to collide that universe with the Harry Potter universe. Also, I love your characterization of Voldemort here, because he’s not just a one-dimensional villain out to kill Harry Potter. Oh, no, he’s out to dominate the world and potentially new worlds, and he’s also still got that desire to learn things when he comes across something he’s not familiar with, which is a nice recall to the blips we get to see of him at Hogwarts. This OC of Unspeakable Sallow is so cool and he’s a quiet badass, and I look forward to seeing what you do with him and the rest of the Stargate crew in the continuation of this fic. The worldbuilding of that “third” planet you did was quite excellent, and the appearance of their legitimate god was just a tiny bit funny and also a very good plot device. 

 

Great job on this fic so far, Barbara! I’ll have the results up soon. :)

 

~Madi

Author's Response:

Madi,

Thanks for the review! The legitimate god is actually the bad guys of Stargate, a race of called the Goul'd.