Name: potionspartner (Signed) · Date: 21 Jun 2020 12:44 PM · For: Chapter 1

Hi, I’m here for the Gnome Throwing Reviewing.

I love how you tacked your story to the end of the epilogue. And we got to meet so many new characters and connecting them to some old ones, like Amy being Victorie’s best friend (although I did have a bit of trouble keeping up with who is who.) Of course, the first thing that jumps out about Matt Eckerton is the scars which immediately makes one think of lycanthropy. Since the other story I saw in your AP was about lycanthropy, that’s my current guess (but of course, that brings up an entire new set of questions like is he using Wolfsbane? Don’t they have it in Australia?

 

Either way it looks like Matt and Albus hit it off although I feel a bit for Albus and Rose dealing with all the celebrity stuff. Can’t wait to see which house they end up in. Whether you make it canon or not, I bet they’ll be together.