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I've been meaning to check out this fic for ages and I'm so glad that I've finally had the chance to do so because I immediately love it. Like immediately. That entire first paragraph made me feel like I was watching a movie and there was this voice over and I could see the scene being zoomed in to this girl, Audrey.
Audrey is such a great character, by the way. She's comfortable with life and content with the way things are going but she also has dreams (working in magical law) and people (Mr. Cornwwell, I'm looking at you, sir!) don't see that just because she's not the type to scream on about it.
Allllll of your side characters are so brilliant, by the way. Vivian is my favorite! I absolutely love her/want her in my life/feel like she's real. She just seems like way too much fun (passing on hot patients because she's decided she might want to date them). And she foils Audrey nicely. "I am an adult you know." "Well, good - one of us has to be." Loved this line. I think it should the dyanmics perfectly.
And Moira - another character I already adore. She sees the value in Audrey and uses the power her postion allows her to help her out, which is just the most heartfelt thing. I really do hope that Audrey continues to visit her.
I already can't wait to come back for more of this. Luckily, I have several chapters ahead of me so I have plenty of reading material.
Love, Quilly.
(and tag!)
Author's Response:Quilly, thank you so much. Like I said in my novel nest these early chapters were largely written a decade ago, so I get to feeling insecure about them sometimes, and I'm glad this was still able to hook you anyway. Vivian is wonderful, and there's almost as much about sisters in this story as there is about romance.
<3 Melanie
Hi, Melanie! Back for more!
I’d felt as though I could have just thrown myself at him, too happy to finally be speaking again to bother with reopening wounds; and that maybe that could have been good enough -- Yes, Audrey, yes! That is good enough. But you're not going to let it be, are you? Sigh.
And when his cheek found itself nuzzling into my palm I wasn’t entirely sure which one of us had started it, just like when I found myself tucked into his arms I couldn’t say who was responsible for it. -- Alright, never mind. False alarm. Things are going swimmingly.
But I also had no idea where to begin talking about everything — it was so twisty and overwhelming — so I gladly sat when he pulled out my chair, and accepted the glass of wine he offered before taking his own seat. -- Stress Eating: Dating Edition! I suppose there is a great deal these two need to hash out. Let's get on with it, then.
“Robbie was around there, taking care of something. Popped in and actually asked me whether I needed anything.”
“Did he?” he asked lightly, focusing once again on his dinner. -- I continue to suspect that this was Percy's doing. Time will tell.
“She’s aggressively incompetent. Sheila, I mean; not Bonnie, obviously.” -- It's the worst sort of incompetence, really. The sort that can't be satisfied merely screwing up the things that fall into its lap, but feel compelled to go out in search of new and interesting things to leave in ruins.
I love the idea of Rule Thirteen. Not only of its existence, which dovetails perfectly with the type of nonsense the Ministry of Magic seems to promote at every turn, but also that sort of metaphorical connnection with the non-existence of things like the thirteenth floor of most tall hotels. Brilliant!
“What do you mean, ‘it’s done’? You’re disputing it, aren’t you?”
“No, I accepted it. You saw I took the days this week.” He took another bite of his dinner. -- OK, I'm at as much of a loss here as Audrey. Didn't Percy just finish pushing her way out of her comfort zone over a matter of principle at work? Did I dream that? What the hell, Percy?
OK, I am going to give him some extra credit for timing his suspension so as to make his new supervisor's transition more difficult. Still thinking that he took the easy way out here, but once I accept that, the timing was a good way to send a message.
From there, things get really serious. Compared to the last serious conversation Percy and Audrey had, I felt much better dialed in on how things were progressing this time. Maybe that's a matter of having the right expectations, but I feel like there was more to it. You really nailed the pacing and the back-and-forth and the little cues that kept me plugged into who was saying what and the sort of tone and emotional context. Also, you do a fabulous job of expressing Audrey's rapidly evolving emotional state. Which isn't really easy to do, because she goes on a roller coaster of feelings in this chapter. I was really happy for her. She was finally able to be honest with Percy about the way he makes her feel. It was obviously eye-opening for Percy as well, realizing how he's been inadvertently making her feel small and unappreciated. I also love the way you wrote his reactions. He does push back. He does get upset and frutrated and this isn't some super-easy conversation where reality strikes him in the forehead like a bolt of lightning and everything is easy from there. Conversations like this are hard and they take time and there's a lot of trial and error before both sides finally come to an understanding. It felt all the way through like there was a very real risk that they two of them wouldn't get there, which I think is the way this should have felt. Love is never without risk.
“You, erm,” I began, a little flustered. I couldn’t resist the playful quip. “You don’t usually use words like that with me with your trousers on.” -- This right here is a million dollar line. This belongs in a movie that wins awards. But not an Oscar, unless it's for makeup or set design. Movies that win Oscars in the major categories are boring.
And just like that, no more navy blue windowpane. -- Those last four lines were the perfect way to end this one. I think we've set the stage for one of your "off-screen" smutty interlude one-shots. I'll be hanging out here, killing time, waiting for you to post that.
Great job, Melanie! You brought them back together and you did it in such a perfect way!
Until next time,
-Dan
Author's Response:Dan, always ALWAYS lovely to hear from you!
You're not wrong that this would be the perfect jumping off point for another smut, haha. I've considered it. I posted another smut recently, Inaudible, but it's not tied to any particular moment in the Irrational-verse.
But I'm glad you liked the "words like that with your trousers on" line, hahaha. Major Percy headcanon, that he doesn't like to curse in front of ladies -- *especially* Audrey -- except when... yeah. Then all bets are off. Compartmentalization, you know. XD
I really do need to get my shit together with this story again. I know you know the feeling -- sometimes you just hit that wall. I picked up some new projects, you may have noticed, but I'm aiming to get back on track with this one. I also started posting a flash fiction series exploring ALL of Percy's love life from Penelope to Audrey and having a tonnnn of fun with that, though.
Do you know, I think you might be the ONLY person who has guessed (correctly) that Percy was the one who sent Robbie to see if Audrey needed anything. Nobody else pointed out the distinctly weird circumstances of that encounter! Anyway, I don't think Percy is going to outright acknowledge that -- I put it in there to see if anyone would catch it and figure it out, so I'm glad you did. Hell, I don't know, maybe Audrey will just figure it out at some point.
I'm really glad you liked how this chapter went and found it realistic. I'm with you -- these conversations are hard and don't usually go ideally, not at first. People get defensive when being told they've hurt someone.
Thank you so much as ever!!
<3 Melanie
Hi, Melanie! It's been a long, long time. But I'm excited to dive back in and see what my two favorite frustrating nerdy soulmates have been up to.
Your Wizengamot seems to look and behave a lot like I imagine them. A bunch of elderly witches and wizards, pretending not to be bored so that they can cling to whatever vestiges of relevance they still possess. It's sad, but a very pretentious and overwrought flavor of sad. Kind of like the US Senate with fewer wingnuts.
“Hope he’s not as wishy-washy as you’ve made him out to be. She hates that.” -- Oh, my. This isn't off to a promising start, because Demetrius is as wishy-washy as they come.
So Robbie... let's just say that I have suspicions about the real reason why he popped into the courtroom.
Goodness. So Percy couldn't stay away. I kind of suspected that he might turn up. This is a big moment, after all.
Yes! I don't know whether it's that Audrey finally grew tired of watching Demetrius look silly or whether this was just her moment, but she's finally taken control!
The fact that I had two hands and absolutely no idea what to do with them as I spoke. -- We've all been there.
I'm sitting hear, dearly hoping that Audrey finds some subtle, outwardly pleasant way to put the Honorable Mr. Fawley in his place. What a jerk! OK, it seems that the other honorable members are taking the lead on that front. Still, though, it would be nice to see him fall down an elevator shaft.
Audrey really pulls through in the end. I love the way she threads the needle on explaining why Ollivander and the Swynns might not be forthcoming without making them out to be bad people.
And Audrey and Percy are talking again! Talking and planning dinner. This has the feel of one of those dinner dates where the food will end up left on the table as... other pressing matters take over. At least I hope so!
“I take it you’re probably not in the mood for a debriefing right now.” -- Hermione knows how to read the room.
I have really, really missed this story! I'll be back to read the next chapter soon!
-Dan
hey,
here for our swap :)
I love audrey so much, i think about it every time that i come back to this story so that's always so fun for me. i think her thought process is always realistic, she would rather awkwardly lie than risk being rude about it. that's so very english of her. you have such a lovely sense of who she is which I really think is brilliant. she's so funny to 'Nobody but society, for centuries.' her internal snark is amazing.
while audrey seems to be really confused by percy's confession, it seems to come from a place of not understanding the world at this point in time. percy didn't act perfectly but he has own that and showed her which is brave. i do appreciate that audrey is really going out of her way to understand his experience because it's pretty obvious that she is searching for a way to overcome the things that she's learnt. she is trying to balance her feelings, she has quite a black/white pov. her father seems like a good guy with strong moral compass. audrey is very sheltered though.
i love the stuff abot wandlore being a mixture of yours and jkr. i love your creative mind! audrey and percy's very sweet. I'm glad we got to see the growth in their relationship and audrey's personal journey. I'm very pleased that they're getting back on track because they truly work so well together. the last scene was so lovely, it felt so lovely to show their relationship in such an personal situation. i noticed the quote from your forum sig too! I love it's audrey saying that to percy himself!
Abbi xx
hi mel,
here for galazy reviewing event :)
oh wow, audrey is quite the state about what she's learnt and it's big news tbh. so it's very realistic that she would need that time to really process what she had been told. I thought I know what she wants and I was right but I thought you played out her thought process really nicely. vivi is amazing again and being audrey's sounding board is perfect role for her because she does know how to keep audrey grounded when her mind is working over time over thinking and stuff. I love the line about her fella not being a saint if that's what she wants then that's not percy.
i thought it was so brave of percy to tell her everything about himself. speaking about being poor to someone who didn't have the same experience sounds very emotional tbh. percy is a lot to take in. it's interesting that Audrey is home schooled it explains a lot about how she thinks about the war as something very far away almost. she is sheltered and not come across some of the same decisions as others. I thought this chapter show how strong Audrey's family unit is, the amazing respect she has for her father.
oh, the wand issue coming back up again is very interesting, i like this thread of plotline. i love the audrey is quite devoted when she is on the case which is nice. I love her office dyamic between everyone. it's nice to see Percy talking again to her. i love the subtext in their conversation and he mentioning that hermione does know who she is and stuff, very cute. can't wait to see what happens next.
Abbi xx
Hi Melanie!!
I am so happy to be back for Irrational! This is for a little thanks for taking a peek at 'by blood' chapter 24 <3
I love this first bit with Percy, Bill, George, and Audrey! I feel like she does such a good job of navigating their family; playing along when it's fun and sticking up for Percy when he needs it :) And Victoire is so sweet <3 I love how you give us these little subliminal scenes of Percy and Audrey in family life, it's a very hopeful foreshadowing (i'm hopeful, just like Mrs. Weasley)
YES that's such a great point!! I wonder how Voldemort's blood-sucking tendencies might have affected the unicorn hair. Though they didn't use the hairs that had fallen, so I doubt they'd use hairs from fallen unicorn :( I'm curious to hear more abou this from Hermione. But oh no...not Voldemort. I like how you point out how impactful his name was on other people outside the golden trio/Harry's friends and family. And that little bit of bitterness between Percy and Hermione was so familiar and so like the both of them
Wow, I love how Percy opens up to Audrey in this chapter. I feel like, even though we are in her persepctive, the way she sees him is so transparent befcause of how much they trust each other now <3 that one bit about Percy not really understanding his relationship with his brothers is such a good point, especially with them being apart for a few years. And being too young for Bill but too old for Fred and George...</3 my heart is broken
And if it wasn't broken enough, that part about Fred looking like Charlie at the Battle of Hogwarts is SO terrible and I just imagine that scene happening.
I think this is the perfect time to say 'I love you' <3 after seeing some not-so-simple family dynamics and sharing something so personal and private. I just love all the reminiscing in this chapter and Audrey just being a soundboard for Percy.
I love it and them!!
thanks Melanie <3
hi mel - here for galazy reviewing! :)
after last chapter, i think I really needed to know if we got any progress on the percy/audrey situation as I was heartbroken for them.
"Nonsense! You've got to assert your dominance early on." < vivi is a queen, i love her and her contrast to audrey's personality is so perfectly played. I knew that viv would be so keen to kick percy's arse lmao. it kinda deserved it but i see after this chapter his pov much more clearly really.
oh, the wands plot is coming along a bit more. I really wonder what you are taking this plot because it has so much potential. I like the rival to ollivanders and audrey's note about how the women working within the industry was really nice. I love the matchmaking as an extra service haha, I really wonder what kinda wand percy has!! maybe it's been stated but i can't remember now. wouldn't bet against it being a willow though.
oh, the scene with Percy telling audrey! this scene was really emotional and the guilt that he carries around with him is so powerful and sad. it is a lot of information for Audrey think over. I really felt for Percy. I know some people don't like percy for the whole fred thing but to me it's never been his fault. i'm sad that he feels like its all his fault. i hope aubrey makes around but it's a big deal and not everyone is going to see this situation the same. I'm glad that Audrey felt prepared to listen to him though. I have lots of hope.
Abbi xx
hi mel - here for galazy reviewing event :)
omg, so audrey and percy have this lovely evening together. Vivi is being the normal hilarious self! she's one of my fave. percy's exit. everything seemed to be going so well for them which was so cute. the meeting of the parents obviously such a big step for them as a couple but it seemed to go really well so I'm just really kinda surprised with his reaction afterwards. audrey put her foot in a couple of times about his family but how on earth is she meant to know? she obviously knows how fred died but the deep way it's effecting Percy.
I think they both freaked out a bit. like percy has left Audrey so confused and just worried about the whole thing. he isn't making such sense, he's always been quite awkward but this is another level of it! I guess he feels he can't do the same for Audrey?? maybe he doesn't feel like he can be happy and introduce her to his family (maybe they aren't on too good terms?), be open and giving. it's really not clear. Audrey who was obviously very embarrassed of the whole thing as she's been so open towards him which is something she isn't really use to kinda shuts down herself and won't let him explain.
i'm rooting for these guys but it seems like there is a lot of issues to work from them individually to make this work. I always love to see personal development away from the main pairing so I would be really interested to see where they go from this point which proved to be a disaster for them. I hope to see efforts to fix this bc they're too cute and too perfect for each other for their walls to be up so high!
Abbi xx
Hi Melanie!
For once in my reading experience you’ve given me exactly what I asked for…They finally learned how to talk to each other. Also I can’t believe I’ve read everything you have posted for this story (up to this point) in the last 3 or 4 days…I implore you to hurry up and update so I can get the rest of the story lol. I’ve already invested this much time, I figure a few more chapters won’t kill me…unless you plan on them breaking up again anytime soon.(Please don’t do that to me…I don’t think my heart could take it)
That’s it then…Everything is out on the table, laid bare for them both to see. I get that they are stubborn idiots but things would have gone sooooooo much smoother for them had they just done this in the first place. But they’re happy and back together and I guess in the grand scheme of things that’s all that really matters at this point.
Seriously though Please update soon so I can see where you take the rest of it. I need to know if there’s a connection between the dragon pox and the wand issue It’s driving me bananas trying to figure out what’s going on there.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
YAASSS Way to go Audrey!!! Way to kick some Wizengamot ass! She handled that like a champ and it was great, amazing, wonderful, superb, stupendous, grand (and I’m out of adjectives) to see that side of her! And good on Demetrius for standing back and letting her shine. That was her moment and she took charge and rocked it!
And OMG Percy showing up to support her and noticing the exact moment when she realizes “I can do this” and silently encouraging and reassuring her. This feels like the first step in the right direction they both needed to take and I’m hoping that they are finally able to lay it all out on the table and be fully open and honest with each other. After all, they’ve been through and what this fight has done to each of them, they needed a win. I’m so glad that this appears to be what they needed to open the door for them to talk.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
As much as I hate that the girls both ran away, I’m glad to see that they have a sounding board other than each other. It’s great to see that they are close enough with their parents that they know what each of the girls need and how to get them to talk about whatever’s bothering them.
Leave it to “hit wizard dad” to get to the heart of the matter in a simple, yet effective way. The way he guides Audrey without telling her what to do is what I wish my relationship with my dad was like. If I’m being perfectly honest, I wish my relationship with my parents was like theirs. But that’s neither here nor there in the grand scheme of things.
Moving on.
Are these two ever going to get it together and mutually apologize to each other? I need happy times and fluff and to not end up disliking Percy again. I need…well quite frankly I’m not sure what I need but whatever it is it needs to be happy. *reaches for adult beverage sitting next to me*
Wait, they hired a bimbo to do what Percy was already doing and had been doing for months?? The Ministry really must not like him after the war? Actually, it sounds like something my job would do.
Hold on again!?!? Why is Percy being suspended? What happened? And What is Audrey going to do? Still waiting over here to see who is going to be the bigger person and apologize first. I just need them to talk, get everything off their chest and out into the open and be a happy couple again!
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Poor girl is already a part of the family. She just doesn’t know it yet. I’m glad Hermione is able to be a mostly impartial third party here. She agrees with Percy but sees Audrey’s side of it too. I hope she can knock some sense into both of them so they fix things soon. I just want to see more happy times and less crying.
OMG She has to make an official statement?! Will this girl’s torture never end? I can only imagine the hell she’s going through having everyone give her pity looks and now to have to rehash it all for an official report. And she still does her best to not paint Percy in a negative light. The poor thing is already having a big enough pity party on her own. What more is she going to have to go through?
Percy is really hurt by this isn’t he? Even I’m not sure anymore what the right thing to do is. I think both of them have good intentions but the communication fell through and put both of them in the wrong. But at the same time, I don’t think an apology could fix this. I get the feeling that it’s going to take some big romantic gesture to get them to forgive and forget.
And to have Viv be going through some shit too?!? Damn you really are tyring to break my heart into a million pieces again aren’t you. I can’t believe that Viv was the person who treated the little boy who died. And then for Michael to dump her when he knew she was going through some shit…The poor girl. Hopefully, their parents can put things in perspective for both of them.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Wow talk about being careful what you wish for. I certainly wasn’t expecting the fight to go to that extreme. I’m glad someone is in Audrey’s corner but I get the feeling that this is going to do more harm than good. I understand where he’s coming from but he overstepped here. They both have every right to be mad but I think Percy is misdirecting his anger here. He seems to be mad at Audrey for not standing up for herself and putting him in this situation when really (at least in my opinion) he should be mad at himself or at least Mads.
Oh come on Mads that was a LOW blow if I’ve ever seen one. And the fact that no one stepped in before it got that far?!? What the ever-loving hell is this? Something should have been done long before Mads brought that up and I’m wondering more now about what the repercussions will be for both of them for having it out in the office like that. Especially since Percy is acting as a supervisor and they have a history.
Oh no! I don’t want to see them fight. I wonder how this is going to be resolved. I get that they each thought they were doing the right thing and apparently there was no right thing to do in this situation. Here’s hoping the pair learn from this and make up soon. I don’t know if I can take a long drawn out fight.
OMG WHY!?!?!?!?!? Why must you rip my heart out again? Wasn’t the last time enough???? I…I…You can’t break them up!!! I mean I get it but you can’t do that to me! Not after all this time!!! Don’t you understand the level of NEED that I have for them to be together?! Mel!!! I feel like I just went 12 rounds with [insert name of random boxer here] and didn’t come out on top. I feel as if I was the one broken up with…I need wine, I need Ice cream, I need movies, I need…well I need them to get back together as soon as possible.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
P.S. Sorry about the rambling thing, I’m trying out a new way of reviewing each chapter as I go. Not quite live reviewing but close…
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
No babes don’t let her win! I’m like Percy here, I can’t believe that she isn’t going to report Mads. I understand why especially since she can’t find her original copy of the proposal but it would be nice to see her fight back even just a little bit. I hate seeing her so defeated so early in the fight. She’s given up before she’s even had her turn and it hurts to see that.
And then for everything to come to light anyway? What is even happening here?! I’m glad she’s getting recognition for her work and that apparently Mads was raked over the coals for her actions but seriously what’s going on here? And more importantly why is there another player in the game all of a sudden? What does Lionel have to do with all this? Did he know what Mads was doing the entire time? Gaaaaahhhh so many questions!!!
I’m hoping and hoping with every fiber of my being that the next chapter is going to pick up where this one leaves off and that we get to see who Mads is yelling at (although I think I have an idea) and just who brought up the issue with Demetrius. Way to ruin me with a cliffhanger Mel.
Eternally hoping that Mads gets put in her place some more and that Audrey is the one who does it.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Awww poor babes is still sick. And is apparently being mothered by everyone. I can only imagine what that’s like. No wait…I lived with one set of grandparents or the other along with my parents until I was a teenager so I KNOW what its like to have directions coming at you from all sides when you’re sick. Just leave me alone with my books and let me die in peace thank you.
It’s cute how Percy is teasing her and humoring her at the same time. Like yes you’re all green and scaly but you’re still cute and you’re my green and scaly girl. He’s such an old soul and it reminds me of the few old timey movies I’ve watched. And some books I’ve read also.
And Mads strikes! I was expecting it but what a low blow to kick Audrey when she was down. I’m still holding out hope that she fights like hell to get the proper credit and tells Mads exactly where to shove it.
And the blows keep coming…Even Percy seems to be against her at this point. I truly wish she would fight and see if there’s a way to prove that she had the idea first. I understand Percy’s frustration that she won’t do anything but she has to do something!! It’s not fair for her to have done all that work but get none of the credit or even have a chance to present her ideas. I really hope someone puts Mads in her place soon! I need more domestic bliss and this is throwing a wrench in my desire for happy reading!
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
YASSS! Feisty Ginny! I’ve been waiting to see her show up lol AND Fiesty George?!?!? Did I win the lottery or something?
And this bit about Audrey feeling off…she’s not what I think she is is she? Maybe the stress of this wand thing is just getting to her. Then again…maybe not.
Ahhh so that’s what game Mads is playing…She’s wanting to use this to get herself into the Department of Mysteries…If that’s the case I can understand why she wouldn’t want the wands taken from them. I get the feeling she’s going to do an Ides of March on Audrey with her proposal. If she does, Audrey better fight like hell to get credit for her work.
Glad to see Percy encouraging her to keep fighting to present her proposal. I would hate to see all that work go to waste. He made a valid point and I really hope she keeps trying.
So she’s not what I thought she was…But now I’m worried even more for her. Didn’t Percy’s boss’s son die from Dragon Pox? What does this mean for Audrey?
Audrey sounds just like I do when I’m sick. I’m a horrible patient. I want to be left alone yet taken care of at the same time…it’s a struggle. I’m loving how she’s sounding like a petulant child here. It’s so out of character for her and it’s endearing. And then Percy taking care of her…seriously can he be any more of a perfect boyfriend? Seriously? Can he? I think not.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Yay playful Percy is back! But we all know who’s really in charge lol. I always enjoy reading domestic things and this bit with Audrey tying his tie and seemingly calming his nerves was cute!
And my happiness has been dashed yet again. I swear sometimes that man’s pride is going to be his downfall. My heart hurts for him and what he must have suffered through after the war. I can only imagine the flashback he must have had to his own inquiry and how hard it must have been on him to be back there. That combined with the stress he’s been under and it’s no wonder he had an anxiety attack. I know she only saw the aftermath but Audrey handled it like a pro. I’m so glad Percy has someone like her in his corner.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Way to go badass Hermione! I love to see her kicking ass with the Wizengamot! And then to fall into a conversation with Audrey as if she didn’t just go all Elle Woods on them…I don’t even know what to say!
As I’ve said before, I love that Hermione is giving Audrey the courage to do all this. It makes me wonder if this is how law-making is done in the real world. Obv I’m not a lawyer but it makes sense to me that one would have to present their case and answer questions just like Hermione did here.
I love how this chapter (or at least the first half, I may or may not have just realized that I haven’t finished the chapter yet) focuses on Audrey and her personal journey. It’s great to see and a refreshing change from seeing her developing relationship. I feel like it’s very in character for Audrey to just say I love you and then move on to the hearing like nothing happened. (I also feel like I’m the only one making a big deal out of it here…I could be wrong but hey it’s alright I’m used to that lol)
I think my favorite part was Hermione asking “So why should it be any different just because the person asking the questions is wearing purple robes?” it was such a simple question but also makes so much sense. If it was that easy to answer the questions from friends and family, why should the Wizengamot be any different?
Okay now that I’ve actually read the other half of the chapter…(I can’t believe I did that…oops)
Percy really doesn’t like Mads, does he? I’m beginning to get the sense that his dislike is more personal than just an overall mistrust. But I also get the feeling that he’s right and that Mads is about to snatch the rug out from under Audrey. She’s using Audrey’s introverted nature against her and using it to elevate her own position.
I also get the feeling that Percy’s so used to doing all the work for no credit that he just doesn’t want to see the same thing happen to Audrey. But he’s so stressed right now that he really can’t add anything more to his already full plate. I’m beginning to wonder if his boss is ever going to come back or if there’s something else going on here.
Moving on, Viv has a classic breakup face going on there…Is she really getting sick or did her and Michael break up? It’s making me want to grab a pint and drown my sorrows in the Cookie Dough Hagen Daas I have in the freezer. I’m glad that Audrey is there for her though even if I have no clue what is going on. (let’s be real here, I usually never have a clue about what’s going on)
I want to know more about what’s going on in the world so I guess I’d better get moving on with the next chapter.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Um hi, excuse me, um what was that?!? I was not expecting to be taken on such an emotional roller coaster. This was really sweet and sad and funny and idek what else it was but it was something!
Okay did I miss something or are we ever going to hear more about this stag night incident? I feel like there’s a story here you’re holding hostage. I want, no, I NEED to know what happened here.
I love how you’re including Fred in the story despite him being dead. It’s nice that it’s not a “we don’t talk about Bruno” situation where it’s “yeah he’s dead but we don’t talk about it because going on like he never existed is the way to go.” Also. that bit about his last wand being made with unicorn hair has me begging for that not to be the reason he died. I feel like you wouldn’t have shared that information with us if it wasn’t important but, PLEASE don’t let his wand backfiring be the reason he’s dead. I don’t think my heart can take it!
Anyway, I thought it was odd that Percy got so angry with Hermione over saying Voldermort. It would be normal for them and I feel like that was more of a failing on Percy’s part for not warning Audrey that the family uses the name rather than calling him he-who-has-no-nose. It’s such a common thing for them that it makes sense that Hermione would think nothing of saying the name.
Before I go I just want to say one thing…FINALLY!!!!!!!! I’ve been waiting 17 chapters for them to finally say the words and now they did and it was cute and sweet and a bit anticlimatic really but so fitting for them. It was the perfect ending to the chapter and omg I still can’t believe you got me to actually like this version of the Weasley family. Kudos to you!
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Author's Response:Hahaha, the stag night remains mostly a noodle incident where it's never explained what happened so it's more fun to just imagine the worst in your head. Though I have sprinkled references to it into other fics.
lmao "we don't talk about Bruno." Yes, I think Fred needs to be talked about. And no, nothing nefarious happened with his wand, it was just a segue into this conversation. :)
The thing about Percy getting upset about what Hermione did is that it really doesn't matter whether it was her fault or his. Percy had an emotional, protective reaction to Audrey being upset. And he was very Extra about it. But that's what he does, when he sees a problem he bulldozes it. And tbh, Hermione's response is colored by her own emotions as well, because she tends to let perfect be the enemy of good, and she can sometimes sacrifice compassion when she's feeling defensive or trying to make a logical point. Like she could have just said "My bad, I see why that's upsetting for you," but "My bad" isn't really in Hermione's usual repertoire, you know?
Hah, I guess the ILY was a little anticlimactic, but I love quiet "pass the salt" declarations of love so much, and as you say, it's very fitting for them.
<3 Melanie
Hi Melanie!
You’re going to have me questioning Madeline’s intentions for the rest of this story aren’t you? I’m still not sure what her goal here is and I’m starting to get suspicious after she strong-armed Demetrius into issuing that recall. Is she going to take the credit for all of Audrey’s work? Will Audrey realize this and tell her where to shove it? Why can’t I find someone who will get me flowers on my birthday? The world may never know…(actually I don’t like getting flowers on my birthday but I’m off-topic here so I’ll reign it in)
Anyway, Are the guys really trying to ask her to introduce them to Ginny and Angelina? Like seriously why does everyone seem to think she’s only dating Percy for the status elevation? That would be like me asking my exes dad to introduce me to George Strait (they went to High School together) or being best friends with my best friend just because she can get me in to meet Blue October. (I always seem to have to work on the nights they’re in town and I think the whole thing is rigged lol) The nerve of some people I swear!
Oh I can’t wait to see Audrey’s reaction when Percy tells her about the car! I picture a lot of shock and awe with that story.
I love how encouraging Hermione is being, She’s trying to point Audrey in the right direction and at the same time, encourage her to find the answers herself. I know I would kill for that kind of support in my professional life.
Poor Percy! He sure is going through a lot right now with taking over his boss’s job and not knowing when he’ll be back. He also seems to be really rattled about this death. I wonder if it’s someone he knew or if was really Dragon Pox that killed him.
I hate that this chapter ended on such a sad note, I kind of wish there was more there with Audrey trying to cheer him up or at least help him relax a bit. Hopefully, things get better for him soon.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Yes I’m back to continue fangirling over this story! (I’m determined to finish it before the event ends lol)
Okay first, I found it interesting that Hermione was willing to help Audrey with changing the regulations for wandmakers without taking it over. I can only imagine the confidence boost it would give Audrey to not only get the laws changed but to know that she did it pretty much on her own.
Second, I get the feeling that Percy is foreshadowing a potential plot twist here with Mads. I know the ministry is full of gossip and rumors but I want to know how Percy knows so much about this inquiry that may or may not have happened. And I also want to know what this information means for Audrey and her quest to get to the bottom of this wand thing.
Third, I have a question: does Darcy think Audrey is only with Percy because it elevates her social status? Or is she just giving the poor girl a hard time? Inquiring minds want to know? Darcy seems like a great girl but cares a bit too much for status if you ask me. In some ways, she sounds like a gold digger but more with social standing than money. Idk…maybe its just me.
Last, but certainly not least, I love that Audrey cooks the muggle way. It shows that there is at least one thing she’s passionate about (that isn’t Percy) and that she cares enough about it to do it “the long way” instead of taking the easy way out with magic. I love the balance with the wizarding world and the muggle world her childhood gave her. It’s always nice to see witches/wizards able to not rely on magic for everything. I think it showcases a lot of room for growth. And we’ve certainly seen that with Audrey. I think before she was transferred, she never would have dreamed of rocking the boat in the way that this wand thing can cause. (at least that’s my opinion of her anyway)
Anyway, I have rambled on longer than I intended to and must go now to continue reading and fangirling over this story.
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Author's Response:Hahah, I think Hermione would have a knee-jerk reaction of wanting to get really involved buuuuut I think she's legit very busy with her own work, plus they're grownups now and not in school and it's kind of bad form to just take over a project from a department you don't even work for, you know?
Darcy is just... kind of brazen. She doesn't literally think Audrey is dating Percy for the status, but her point is like, "Wow, what a great bonus," you know? She is a little too concerned with status and appearances and is kind of shallow.
<3 Melanie
Hi Melanie!
I loved this! (I know I know I say that every chapter but it’s true)
Anyway, I really enjoyed seeing the relationships between Percy and his siblings. It’s great to see that they have a playful banter and are able to joke around and tease each other with no evidence of a grudge or hard feelings. The “H.B” bits had me dying of laughter.
And OMG all the ways they’re trying to hint to Ginny that she should elope without risking Molly hearing, only for Ron to open his mouth and ruin it. I can only imagine how that would have gone if Bill and Charlie were around to participate.
Anyway I’m trying to read and type without getting caught at work so I’m gonna go for now lest I tempt fate and lose my phone...
Peace, Love and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Yayayayayayayay!!!! Happy dance! It took them long enough. I hate how long it took them to get here but I’m glad they finally did. I was tired of being bitter and hurt for them.
I’m so glad Audrey was able to find someone to talk to about the war that she trusted. It really helped her understand why Percy did what he did and that he really did have no choice in the matter.
It was so great to see confident, smooth, playful Percy again. I swear I need to find someone with that level of confidence that isn’t totally arrogant.
Anyway now that I’m happy again, I guess I’d better move on and read the next chapter to see if you fully redeemed yourself.
Peace, Love(Okay I guess I love you again) and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
Hooray for progress! This chapter was full of it on every level. It was great to see the “happy couple” on speaking terms again and it was great to see Madeline’s softer(not sure if that’s the right word…friendlier? Nicer? Yeah nicer works) nicer side. I have to say I agree with her on the boys being annoying.
I’m still bummed that it’s taking them this long to realize they belong together and that I need, no sorry the WORLD needs them to come to their senses and make up already. I’m hoping that this gets resolved within the next chapter or two. I’m starting to get desperate over here!
Peace, Love(You can have it back when you learn to play nicely with my emotions) and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
Hi Melanie!
I want you to know I’m still mad at you for the last chapter (I no longer hate you though so that’s a good thing) but at the same time, I understand where Percy is coming from. When my grandfather died almost three years ago, I felt the same way. I should have done more. If I did, maybe he’d still be here. (Then again maybe not) My heart is breaking for him having to carry that burden for the rest of his life.
I’m glad he finally told Audrey but hate that they’re back at square one. I just want them to admit they love each other already! This is a hell of a “first fight” and I’m rooting for them to pull through it. (Even if I don’t like the roller coaster it’s got me on)
Anyway, I’m off to read the next chapter to see if they can finally learn how to use their words and tell each other how they feel.
Peace, Love(You’re starting to redeem yourself but I still don’t know that you deserve it) and Tacos
Tasha
-Team Wanderer–2022 review event
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