Name: PinsandKneazles (Signed) · Date: 21 Mar 2022 08:45 PM · For: Vexation

Hey, I'm here for a galazy review! It's been a while since I reviewed the first chapter, but your story stuck with me so I just about remember where it left off. Cousin Scorpius and his annoying Wotter mates, Louis and Albus. And Cecily Greengrass. And a swimming pool. And Cecily absolutely WAS NOT staring at Albus's six-pack, no no...

 

I love how this chapter starts with Cecily singing 'Boom shake the broom' (DJ Snazzy Snorcack) haha!! Yeah, I'm old enough to remember the muggle version. And Potter!! Just casually leaning against a door-frame whilst Cecily is minding her own business and dancing her socks off in what should be the privacy of her bedroom. Does he have no manners? OMG and then he casually wanders over to her balcony and has a smoke?! What a dick! And taking the piss out of Cecily by singing 'Boom, shake the broom' whenever she's around (snort).

 

Now that they've both been made prefect, I can't wait to see them thrown together at Hogwarts, haha!

 

Great second chapter!

 

Meera <3

 

 

Name: AbraxanUnicorn (Signed) · Date: 27 Oct 2019 12:53 PM · For: Irritation

OMG I absolutely adored this story on HPFF and I'm SO glad it's arrived here!! Please say you'll be completing it; it's one of the few that have really stuck in my mind over the last few years, mainly because the plot is exciting, the characters are interesting and engaging, and your writing is simply divine <3

 

Ugh, Al is so insufferably arrogant in this chapter! I totally see him and Scorpius as Gryffindors. It is very understandable why Harry and Ginny would not have trusted him to stay at home on his own, aged fifteen; how many fifteen year olds would you really trust home alone? I can't quite remember all the plot lines in this story, and i'm wracking my brains to remember what issues Al was going through, but to no avail. Oh well, I'll let it remain a mystery until I read further on here. 

 

Your introductory chapter holds my attention so easily, it's well-written, the dialogue is flowing and natural, and the characters aleady have dimension. Cannot wait to read the full story!

 

Brax X

Name: crowsb4bros (Signed) · Date: 10 Oct 2019 12:09 AM · For: Irritation

Hi there! I happened to be the validator in the queue that caught your story and I wanted to say I'm glad you've posted it here! I love next gen and I think these characters have a really interesting dynamic! I'm excited to see where it goes! :) Welcome to the archive! I hope to see you around!