Name: toomanycurls (Signed) · Date: 10 Jul 2019 08:22 PM · For: Chapter 1

:o :o :o :o :o You don't like artichokes???

This story got me right in the feels. I love stories about Remus as a child (and I like stories about family life sa well). What a night and day comparison between their family before Remus was bitten and after. :( :( They were quite the perfect family with all the love and happiness. 

I imagine, and thought you conveyed very well, that Remus' injury and lycanthropy would driv ea wedge between Remus' parents. I could really feelt the resentment and guilt between John and Sylvia. I can't imagine having a terrible experience like they did and coming trhough it with their relationship as good as it was before. 

Reading about Slyvia teaching Remus to cook was really sweet. She's a great mommy. <3 

I like to think the happy night was a start of them healing as a family and not just a throwback to happier times. 

Excellent story!

Author's Response:

Rose!

I'm so excited to see you on my AP, you know? <3

No, I don't like artichokes... I'm very bad at eating my vegetables... *hides*

Aww... I'm so glad this story touched you! <3 I love writing about children, and family life, and Remus! <3

Remus being bitten would have a big impact on the family... I always feel so terribly sad thinking about it... :( I'm glad you felt I did a good job showing how the dynamics in the family have changed.

Silvia is a great mum! I love her so much! <3

I'm sure they'll be alright as a family eventually! :)

Thank you so much for the lovely review!!!