Name: Dojh167 (Signed) · Date: 16 Aug 2018 11:29 PM · For: iii. rome

Quodpot - match 3

 

Back for another! Skipping chapter 2 for now, cause it already has a review and I’m not here for that XD

 

I read the author’s note before the chapter, which thankfully gives me a bit more context for this. I’m glad that I get to read a piece from Nova’s perspective. The first chapter was very Albuslicious, which was fun, but I’m curious to see more of Nova’s personality beyond what I got through Al’s “not” feelings for her.

 

And right from the start, you establish a very different tone for her that no lie I’m going to take more seriously XD

 

Oh, from the author’s note I assumed this would be about them reconnecting when not together, so when I saw Al come up to her and just touch her I got super uncomfortable, but I forgot the part that this is pure fluff. Let’s skip that angsty reconnecting stuff.

 

Being somewhere amazing with someone you love is so great. But I also really like that Nova doesn’t even mention Al in her explanation of why she’s so happy. The place is enough.

 

Interesting point about international magical travel. Makes sense, though I wonder how hard it is to enforce.

 

I may have misread that, thinking the reason Nova yelped involuntarily was because the worker was attractive. Gonna stick with that interpretation.

 

Wow, Professor Longbottom doesn’t mess around, getting the staff to keep these kids lin line.

 

I’m curious why Hogwarts students get a trip to Rome. Hogwarts never sounded so cool.

 

Oooh NEWT History of Magic respect! Honestly, if it wasn’t for Binns that would be the best class at Hogwarts. And mad respect of anyone who figures out how to deal with him well enough for NEWT level.

 

Hehe, their banter is fun.

 

This whole thing was really cute. Indulgent fluff, perhaps, but there’s certainly a time for that and I enjoyed it!

 

Sam.

Name: Dojh167 (Signed) · Date: 16 Aug 2018 10:54 PM · For: i. Ice Queen

Quodpot - Match 3

 

So I’m coming into this without too much familiarity with your Dormitory 2.6a universe, but I figure cute ships are cute ships, right? Let’s see how it goes.

 

WELP that first line sounds like a lie. I know how this romance fic thing works.

 

Oh my goodness, Al, nobody believes a thing you are saying. You cannot make that many justifications that sounds like confessions and it be nothing. How can you even believe yourself? Ah yes, the good old platonic “fully aware of her existence.” Riiiiiight.

 

Omg, new paragraph and he’s still going. This is hilarious. Yes, Al, do it for society.

 

Was I supposed to read that paragraph about her straddling the broomstick as an innuendo? Cause I totally did.

 

This is all very heavy with Al’s perspective, but with the first line we finally get of Nova’s, I find myself laughing with respect for her sass.

 

Oh, NOW he realizes. I’m actually a little surprised that the realization felt like a new thing for him, when it was clear that there was something there from the start of the story. Maybe Al aint the brightest.

 

AL. You were already kinda  a tool, but now you’re thinking about yourself in third person?? Reign it in, dude.

 

This was super cute! And well written =) I’ve always known I needed to check out Dormitory 2.6a (I think I actually saved it to my kind a while back), but hopefully this cuteness will help give me that push I need! This feels like a very significant moment between them, so I’m curious to see how it plays into the rest of the story.

 

Sam.

Name: GinnyHarry123 (Signed) · Date: 05 Apr 2018 03:22 AM · For: ii. dusk

Are there gonna be sonw action  in next chap??

Author's Response:

I'm not yet sure which one shot I'm going to upload next since I'm just transferring them at random haha so we'll see!