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Originally left on 01/20/2006
Ohhhhh!!! Can't wait to see who it is! Even though we most probably know, But still! Lol. I had too much birthday cake.
Author's Response: You know, even as I'm writing I keep myself in suspence!!!...LOL...Crazy as that seems, I work out my plot, then when it comes time to write, it all comes out differently. Thanks for your review and I hope you enjoy the rest :)
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Originally left on 01/20/2006
That's a great story so far, I hope you can update soon.
Author's Response: I'm glad your enjoying it so far :) Thanks for your review. More is on it way.
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Originally left on 01/20/2006
update.update.update...!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: okay, okay okay!! ;) More is on its way, just waiting to be validated.
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Originally left on 01/20/2006
I seem like a very interesting story. I have just one sugjestion(sp?).....you might want to read through your writings when you're done and change some of the words that repeat themselfs again and again. Like, too. You could put also or as well. Anyway, I love it and wish you would update soon.(get to the juciy part LOL!)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review :) And yes, I do have a very awfull habit of repeating the word ""too"" or ""to"" hehehe, I am sorry, I know it stops the flow of reading and I promise to be more mindfull of it. Now just so you know there is a lot of ""He"" being repeated in the next chapter. Just warning you ahead of time ;)
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Originally left on 01/20/2006
ooh....update update update!!!!! I can't wait to find out what happens next...great story!!! I realyl think you are going somewhere good with it.. keep up the great work...and update A.S.A.P!!! Plzzzzz
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reveiw :) More is on its way, just waiting for it to be validated. I hope you continue to enjoy my story.
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Originally left on 01/20/2006
more pleaze!
Author's Response: More is on its way :) It just needs to be validated. I hope you continue to enjoy my story.
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Originally left on 01/19/2006
yey i like it : ) luna lovegood....not whom i exspected for her to call. one of myfavortie characters though.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I like Luna too, I'm not sure where I'm going to go with Luna yet, but she's in my mind :) I hope you continue to read and enjoy my story.
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Originally left on 01/19/2006
awww thats soo sad! i was a ron/hermione person before i was a draco/hermione fan! so it kinda fits...yea know?...them breaking up...yea..ok it was good and im shuting up now ; )
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I never thought of Hermione/Draco before and wanted to see where I could go with it. There are more chapters, just waiting for them to be approved. I hope you continue to enjoy my story.
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Originally left on 01/15/2006
i love it cant wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review :) I have added more chapters. Though only chapter 2 has been approved so far. I hope you continue to enjoy my story.
I am enjoying the story and look forward to seeing how the plot plays out.
Author's Response:Awwww. Thank you so much. Its Mothers Day here and this story is like my baby. It is the first fan fiction I ever wrote back in 2006. It features my journey as a writer and I feel like by the end, I really found my style. This will always remain a favourite of mine, so thank you for reading and reviewing.