Name: scarletheartedlioness (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Declaration of Love in the Rain

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Wow, I was so not expecting for that to be Ron. You were excellent at conveying the fear Hermione was feeling without going into too much detail. I liked this chapter because I felt Ron needed to clear off a few things with Hermione because they couldn't just leave their relationship hanging like they did when she left. Another brilliant, well written chapter! ~Danielle

Author's Response: Again, I thankyou :) Ron has his reasons for doing what he did ;)

Name: scarletheartedlioness (not logged in) (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Declaration of Love in the Rain

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Originally left on 04/11/2006

Ooooh...cliffy. I think that was the perfect way to end this chapter; even though the next sequence of events may not be pleasant ones. I loved how you described the passion between them, and then the attraction they felt toward each other. Another splendid chapter, Elena!! ~Danielle

Author's Response: From this point on, there are a few twists and turns in the plot and later on there are reasons behind their attraction....

Name: scarletheartedlioness (not logged in) (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Declaration of Love in the Rain

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I love it how you are not rushing into their relationship; it's just starting off nice and slow and sweet. I love the passion that exists between them, and I also love it how you are not making Draco and Hermione immediately make out because of this passion. All in all, well laid out and extremely enjoyable. Well done, Elena! ~Danielle

Author's Response: I can see that the ""Thank you's"" are still going to fly out of my mouth!!! Draco and Hermione can't be rushed, there is too much bad ""blood"", pardon the pun, between them and although there is attraction, passion and feelings, well, they both still need to overcome a few things at this point :)

Name: scarletheartedlioness (not logged in) (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Declaration of Love in the Rain

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I loved the kiss. It was described so delicately and I could practically feel the sparks flying between Draco and Hermione. You have a great talent, Elena, and I hope you will continue with your writing. Onto the next chapter for me...=D! ~Danielle

Author's Response: I must thank you yet again :) I surely am continuing...I have more to write for this story and others that are in the works!!!

Name: scarletheartedlioness (not logged in) (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Declaration of Love in the Rain

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I really enjoyed this chapter. I had a good laugh at Draco's attempts to get Hermione to go to dinner with him. I also loved the roses idea; it was great. Overall, this chapter was another brilliant one. Great job, Elena!! ~Danielle

Author's Response: Thank you once again :) Draco would not be Draco if he simply gave up, especially the ""Malfoy Pride"". Instead of using the old ""Malfoy's always get what they want."" line, I tried to express that in what he does.

Name: scarletheartedlioness (not logged in) (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Declaration of Love in the Rain

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Another great chapter. It was good that you left one to just explain everything that had happened with Draco and all that. I felt you used great description and your grammar was great except for a few tiny errors that are hardly noticeable (forgive me; correction mode again =P) Overall, I enjoyed this chapter! ~Danielle

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter!

Name: scarletheartedlioness (not logged in) (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Declaration of Love in the Rain

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Originally left on 04/10/2006

Another brilliant chapter! I love how you've made Draco; kind, caring and nice. It's a pleasant change from the mean Draco. Also, the sequence of events that happened was well laid out. Just a few spelling errors but they are hardly noticeable (Forgive me for I am still in correction mode as I have just finished Beta'ing a story) Great job yet again!! ~Danielle

Author's Response: Well, who wouldn't love a kind and caring and nice draco??? ;) Yes, I'm aware of the spelling errors, no need to feel bad about pointing them out, I didn't realise how many there were until I re-read my story....I just hope your enjoying the reading :)

Name: scarletheartedlioness (not logged in) (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Declaration of Love in the Rain

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Originally left on 04/09/2006

This was very good, too. I liked how you described both Hermione and Draco, and how Hermione didn't realise it was Draco until she really thought about it. Again, the dialogue was good, no matter how little of it there was. Another excellent chapter! ~Danielle

Author's Response: Again, I thank you! this would be one of my favourite chapters. I actually put my own reactions to a stituation in this chappy:) I'll be awaiting your next comment with both nervousness and excitement.

Name: scarletheartedlioness (not logged in) (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 04/09/2006

I liked it how you took a full chapter to just descirbe what the Grand Hotel was like and what Hermione was doing. It was kept short and sharp; bound to keep the reader's attention. Another chapter well done! ~Danielle

Author's Response: I had a really hard time writting this chapter. It had been MANY years since I did the whole ""descripting"" thing, so I was glad to hear you liked this one!

Name: scarletheartedlioness (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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I liked it how you didn't explain everything first off but as you got further into the chapter, explanations occured so it didn't look like you were cramming it all into one part. Again, I enjoyed the dialogue, and you put Luna perfectly in character. Great job! I shall read a few more chapters tomorrow as I am running out of time; but I am looking forward to it! ~Danielle

Author's Response: Of all characters to write, I was scared to touch Luna's, but I just love her character so much. I'm glad you feel I captured her character as she should be :)

Name: scarletheartedlioness (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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You have extremely good grammar and I enjoyed this chapter very much. I loved how you started off with introductions and explanations of what happened during and after the war. Also, the dialogue is brilliant. I am looking forward to reading more! ~Danielle

Author's Response: Ahhhh!!! Should I run and hide now??? Although your enjoying the story so far, I'm being critiqued!!! ;) Oh, and please thank MS Word for my grammar, I feel honered that you think so, but without my trusty Word and its spelling and grammar check, I'd be lost. I have recently re-read my story and found a few spelling errors so once I can fix those, I will.

Name: Chiko (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/25/2006

Please update A.S.A.P. I wanna know what happens next! : )

Author's Response: As soon as I can update, I will :) As always, thanks for reading and reviewing.

Name: BCM (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/21/2006

I love your story!! Please update soon :)

Author's Response: Thanks, and updates are on the way :)

Name: join_me_in_the_darkness1182605 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/19/2006

I'm really in love with your story, Its awesome! i tryed to put my work on this site but it keeps on sayin there is 2 much bad language in it, And there was 2 much violence and abuse, i always have that kind of stuff in my storys, if you ever wanna read some of my stuff here is my e-mail

sweet_as_candy1285206@yahoo.com

Author's Response: Thank you :) perhaps if you want your story on this site, consider editing it so its suitable.

Name: Kim (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/19/2006

I just started this story but i think it is great and cant wait for it to be updated b/c it is awesome so far!! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm glad you are enjoying my story so far. Updates will come once submissions are opened up to us all again.

Name: Elf_Fairy_Bread_Knome-girl (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/18/2006

I just read the story and it is so awesome! I hope you plan on making another story cuz that would rock!!!!! Keep up the good work and can't wait for next update : )

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words :) Part 2 of this story is already in the making, i'm also working on a Dravo/Ginny romance as well as a challenge fic that was proposed in the forums. So more will be posted as soon as I can. I hope you continue to enjoy my stories.

Name: jen_444 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/17/2006

awwww! that was cute! the shower bit was so sweet too! great chappie!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I thought it was sweet too!

Name: Chiko (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/17/2006

Oh I hope Draco and Hermione can always be together! They make such a good couple. CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!! ^_^

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) The next chapter will be up as soon as I can submit again and it all gets validated. Again, thanks for R&Ring!

Name: snailsndme (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/16/2006

woah! it took so long for you to make another chapter i was really sad,

='( but thats okay because now you updated! yay. i cant wait for more. hehe

Author's Response: Awwww, thats so sweet!! Never fear, new chapters and stories will be posted as soon as I can or at this stage, when I'm allowed to submit again! Thanks for reading and reviewing, I really love hearing from people and their thoughts :)

Name: Griffindor_girl102891 (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/15/2006

yay! their together! WOW! snape?! man didnt see that comming! wow..........

Author's Response: hehehe...Yep, Snape! Perhaps there is a reason why he is such a creep!!!! ;)

Name: mum_weasley (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/13/2006

Snape?? In love!!??!! I think I'm going to pass out!! lol

Author's Response: lol....Yes, even Snape has a heart! It may be a cold one, but he has one anyway!!!! :) Thanks for reviewing, as always.

Name: britknee (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/13/2006

awww how sweet!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Name: Dracosmybabisdaddi (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: A Fresh Start

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Originally left on 03/13/2006

l0l..dats funni..update a.s.a.p..plzzz..im lovin da stori.. :)

Author's Response: hehehe...Gotta have some mushy stuff ;) Glad to see your still following along!

Name: Jessi_Rose (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: Letters and Emotions

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Originally left on 03/13/2006

YAY!!! Great chapter!! Gotta love fluffy stuff! :O) Draco is so darn cute in this one, it's hard to remember that I'm suppose to despise him for the books. lol :O) I can't wait for the next update, you are doing a terrific job! ~Jessi

Author's Response: Yeah, perhaps I should add ""Fluffy"" in my summery section!!! hehehe Gotta love the sweet stuff though, it wouldn't be a romance otherwise ;) Thanks so much for your review, I'll update again asap.

Name: Karma (Anonymous) · Date: 20 May 2018 12:18 AM · For: Letters and Emotions

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Originally left on 03/12/2006

aww ive been waiting for a long time for this update pls update soon!!!

Author's Response: I'm sorry to leave ya hangin' like that Karma, I promise to update again asap :)