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Originally left on 08/13/2006
Oh wow.... so sad.... so compicated..... awww.... i am sad now... good story though! Thanks for finally updating and i hope u do again soon!
X's nd O's
The Damsel
Author's Response: Awww, I'm sorry that you found this chapter sad. It is a little, but I promise that it isn't as bad as it sounds :) Thanks for the review.
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
WWWHHHOOOAAAA!!!!! Now THAT is a real shocker for me! I hate seeing them like this but if that is what they must do then so mote it be. (Word of advice: if you know about Mythology, then you will know that the three Fates were named the Moirai. They were Lachesis, Clotho, and Atropos.) excellent chapter i hope the next chapter gets validated soon! I already have a story up, could you please read and review? I reviewed your chapter 19 and you said that you'd read my story! ^_^ ~10~
Author's Response: Thank you :) Oh and I'm aware of Mythology. I have to admit, when writing this chapter, I didn't think of the Mythology aspect. While it may sound like its based on Mythology, I'm not using any of it really, so who ever the 'fates' are, just imagine them as Unknown Forces...lol..
Ahhh, thanks for reminding me!!!...I'll ead over there as soon as I finish these reviews, and thank you for yours :)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
Umm...is she angry at Dumbledore still, or is gonna puke, or both? Lol, this is a good story. Please continue it!
Author's Response: Both :) Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!! :)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
OMG...i bet it's Ron...typical him to ruin a date with Draco...
Author's Response: lol..We'll, you'll see :)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
I love how Luna goes crazy like that, she's hilarious! This is an awesome chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
wow plas update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you, and updates are on the way :)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
WOW i mean WOW. Awesome keep up the good work. It is sad that the first borns would have to be taken but what a story.
Author's Response: Yes, well, they do get 16 years first :) Thank you for the review.
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
EXCELLENT!
keep writing!
please write a happy ending!!!!!!!!!!!
p.s. the prophecies are very well written.
Author's Response: Thank you :) The ending will be............Well, you'll have to wait and see ;)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
Ohmygosh! I'm so happy you've updated. I'm so engrossed with your story.
I liked the way you've explained their prophecies, without being too boring.
Usually, from the other fanfics that I've read, when they give out explantations... they tend to bore me. But yours was different!
I can't wait for you to finish this story.
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad that you think that my prophecies was told in a different way :) That is what I was hoping for.
Thank you for the great review :)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
Oh WOW!!! I am totally hooked, If I wasn't before!! I totally love thsi story!!! I can't wait to read more!!!
10/10!!
Author's Response: lol...Well, I'm glad tou liked my story enough to be 'hooked' :) Thank you for the review and updates are on the way :)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
omg. i love your story. new reader. :P especially the 19th chapter. very original.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you like my story :) Yes, chapter 19 has a bit of emotion in it, so it made the chapter, sad but informative :)
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Originally left on 08/13/2006
Wow that's a twist lol great job
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so. I've had this planned from the start...lol..It just took me a while to get here!!
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Originally left on 08/06/2006
Please write again soon your story is awesome
Author's Response: Chapter 30 is now posted :) Thank you for the review.
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Originally left on 08/02/2006
I really like your story i hope you write more keep doing a good job
Author's Response: Thank you and updates are on the way :)
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Originally left on 08/01/2006
this is great, how much longer till da next chappie??
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm hoping by the end of the week, though I can't promise you anything. I have been busy with organising my wedding, so I haven't had time to write much.
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Originally left on 08/01/2006
1st of all red hot chilli peppers rock
2nd this was good
3rd please write
4 were did u come up with this idea
Author's Response: Thank you :) Updates are on the way, and I came up with thew idea by reading other fan fictions and I wanted to write my own Draco/Hermione story, to how I would see them pairing up and getting togrther. The rest just kinda developed as I worked on the story :)
Thank you so much for the review :)
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Originally left on 07/29/2006
what? what?? you leave it there?! *gapes* i mean i knew you liked your cliffhangers, but that's just mean!!! *splutters indignantly* :p I mean, you had this build up of a very touching moment, and Hermione (not Draco!) does the proposing, and then you stop!!! *glares*.I like this development with Ron too, I think I'm possibly glad they've forgiven him and that he's found other things to do in his life. Very interested to know what's going on with those amulets and why they're going to see McGonagall, but I suppose I will find that out if i keep reading :D . Great chapter :)
Author's Response: lol...Oh, but its fun making people wonder what's going to happen next ;)
Yes, Ron has things to do, very important things. And while what he did was wrong, Ron was still a huge part of their lives (except for Draco) and that part is hard to forget. Also that its just so not like Ron to do something like that. So the big question is, why?
Yes, keep reading and you'll find out soon enough :) Thanks again for the great review...It made me smile :)
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Originally left on 07/28/2006
well now, Snape and Cassiel? That i did not see! And that looks like it will be very interesting indeed, I really want to know what's happened betee them, though you can get the gist, if she's immortal and charged with the protection oft he earth and he, well, isn't. I hope we get to find out more about them though! :)I'm not sur ei like all this destiny stuff mind, I have to say, i'm one for choice and stuff, but it's a fic so i can live with it ;) . And it's a good fic too, I especially liked Ginny's reaction to seeing Draco and Hermione :)
Author's Response: Ahhh...And more surprising stuff is ahead of you yet!!! ;) Yes, I liked Snape with Cassiel too, though not much more of their relationship will be found out here...lol...Perhaps in another story!! :)
Hmmmm, Destiny vs Choice? How does one choose to love someone?? You eaither do or you don't ;) Though, I know what you mean. In this fic, destiny has more meaning then just 'the powers that be' bringing two people together...but I haven't gotten to that part yet.
lol..I love Ginny's character. I think there is so much to her. She can be the wise one, the best friend, the great listener, the over excited girly girl to the bossy, rough tom boy!! In this chapter, she's the over excited friend...lol..
I'm glad you like this fic so far as it isn't one that you would normally read, so thank you and for the review :)
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Originally left on 07/26/2006
ooo, interesting! And I was right about Ron *smug*. But wow this is an unexpected twist, i like it though, adds a lot more to the story and allows it to take a new direction. I had wondered what would happen after Draco and Hermione got it together and now I know, or at least partly know i suppose. Look forward to finding out more about all this :) .I like the new character, Cassiel, they do add things to stories don't they, new characters? ;) . I wonder how far you will let the new dark powers rise, oo will this have some good angst in it? Don't kill anyone really tragic though *looks stern* :p . Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Yes....But is there someone else too????
Yes, at this point in the story, I was feeling the same. So enter Cassiel :) Oh, you must read on....You're getting to all the good stuff now and you're at the point of the story where I'm dying to know what you think...lol..You'll see why once you read on!
Hmmmm...I touch on angst, but nothing really serious. The Sequel will provide all of that. This story is just mainly my romance fic for Hermione and Draco. I think enough twists and turns have been applied to this story...lol..Though, I know more then you at this point, so hurry up and read woman!!! ;)
Thanks again for your reviews...Now shoo...Go read!!!
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Originally left on 07/26/2006
What? what?? there's someone watching them?! that was officially your worst cliff hanger to date, I may have to hate you now :p . I liked the setting though, in the rain, next to the place where Draco had made those wishes. I also thought you wrote the scene well, though I have one criticism. you should be ashamed of using such a corny line as 'not as beautiful as you'! :p .I like dhow you had Hermione be the one who really initiated this, making a picnic and letting him take her on their second date (OMG i just had a thought, it's not ron is it?? watching them i mean), and I liked how you had Draco make her admit her feelings first.
Author's Response: Awww, but I like the corny lines!!!..lol...Makes things more real!! Do you have anyidea how many blokes still use silly lines??? Besides it's supposed to be a fluffy piece, how can you have fluffy without the corny???...lol... ;)
Yes, this whole chapter was hard to right as I wasn't sure if Hermione was going to keep being the assertive one or not. I'm sure you know though, by the time I started typing, things played out as they did :)
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Originally left on 07/25/2006
I can't wait to hear what the prophocies and Dumbuldore have to say, great chapter too
Author's Response: Well, you won't have to wait much longer, the next update will reveal all :) Thanks for the review.
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Originally left on 07/25/2006
I really liked the letter from Narcissa, it seemed very her, in my opinion. She does love Draco in her own way as demonstrated in HBP, but she's also very deep in the Death Eater life, and the letter relfected htis. I didn't like Lucius's so much because I couldn't really picture him saying all of that, but I suppose it fits with the story so I'll let you slide with a bit of OOC'ness :p .I'm glad Hermione went after him after they'd all finished hearing his story and reading the letters. She has no reason not to anymore, and I think it's an important stage that she reaches, when she's run out of excuses really. Will be interesting how you develop this :) .
Author's Response: Ahhh...The letters :) Yes Narcissa's one is the most powerful and your right, Lucius wouldn't say the things he did. However, for the story, he had to be loving in some way. Draco's parents are the reason why Draco is the way he is. His upbringing and beliefs all come from them, so it makes sense to me that to make him change, his parents have to be the one to change all that :)
Yes, Hermione has run out of excuses, she knows all of the truth now, so what next?? I guess you'll have to read on! Thanks again for the reviews.
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Originally left on 07/25/2006
Ahh, so at last we begin to understand Draco and his newfound attachment to the Muggle world. I liked the backstory you made to the place, and it's interesting the part about Snape, I wonder if he'll come into it anymore. What? I can't help wondering :p .It was a good touch that he gave the letters to Hermione I htought, though i'm not happy with you for leaving it right there have to say ;) . Still, I'm glad we're getting explanations! :)
Author's Response: hehehe...Yes, I do have a problem not making my chapters 3500+..lol..Though, I must admit, writing the one that was that amount, was fun!! ;)
Yes, the plot starts to unfold and the mysteries begin to unravel...Snape?? Read on :) Thanks for the review.
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Originally left on 07/25/2006
Awww... its the end? NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! hurry up and plz update i no its hard but still plz?!!!!
Love yas
X's nd O's
~Her Royal Highness The One And Only Damsel Herself~
Author's Response: No, not the end....Yet!! Thank you so much Damsel for all of your reviews. I love hearing from my readers, and you made my day for leaving a review for all of my chapters, even if it was just to tell me that you liked it :)
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Originally left on 07/25/2006
AAAAWWWWWWWW!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! HOW CUTE!!!!! AAAAAAWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!! THAT WAS TOO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!Sry.... i just REALLY REALLY liked that!!!
X's nd O's
The Damsel
Author's Response: lol..So I see :) Thank you, I'm glad you liked it so much :)
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