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Originally left on 10/24/2006
i really liked this chapter keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you :) And I'll try!!
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Originally left on 10/24/2006
Please update!
Author's Response: I will soon :)
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Originally left on 10/24/2006
Hey! I've been reading your story. I think its very good! How you set up the story and the plot! I am envious of you =]
I just wanted to say that your story is very cool. I didn't really know if it was going to be very interesting at first, but then i kept reading and as the story unfolded, i got hooked :). Well, i hope you update soon because i really like your story!
That and the reason that it has Draco and Hermione. I'm a big Draco and Hermione couple fan, lolz. So yes. You're story is pretty cool and i enjoyed reading it! Ok, i will be getting out of your hair now, lolz, and update soon! Bye!
Author's Response: Awwww thank you :) I'm so happy that you did keep reading. This was my first ever attempt at fan fiction, so I know it starts off a little boring, but as I got into the plot, it does get better :)
I too love Dramione fics, so your not alone ;) Thanks again for sticking with my story and for the review!
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Originally left on 10/24/2006
Aww there so cute together i cant wait to read the enxt chapter plz update really soon
Author's Response: Awww, thank you :) The next chapter should be soon. Not sure when, but soon :)
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Originally left on 10/24/2006
that room is about the most awesome room ever!!!! SO sweet,Draco is the best guy ever!!! How long will it take for them to fill that house? *wink wink* lol please update soon!
Author's Response: It is, isn't it?? :) I really wish I had one of those rooms ;) lol..It may take some time to fill it, but I'm sure they have plenty of time for that.
Thank you for the review, and yes, updates will happen a lot quicker. There are only a couple of chapters left to go before this story comes to an end. However, there is a sequel :)
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Originally left on 10/24/2006
I normally don't review till i finish... but OH! you nearly mad ME cry!
gorgeous story - well done!
now... back to the story!
Author's Response: Awwww, really???..*passes you a tissue*..Well, I'm sorry about that...Errr, actually, I'm kinda not!!..lol..I'm glad you felt the emotions of this chapter to make you almost cry :) It means I got the right emotions across. Thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.
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Originally left on 10/24/2006
Gosh i dont noe wat to say but cool fan fic
Author's Response: Awww, thank you :)
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Originally left on 10/24/2006
Wow...i just started reading this story and i found it so interesting cant wait to read more of your cool fan fiction.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so happy you like this beginning and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story :)
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Originally left on 10/20/2006
Is the chapter up soon?!! Please say it is :) Love the story (ies).
Author's Response: Yes, it will be posted in the next two days, so keep your eyes open ;)
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Originally left on 10/07/2006
Great story. Keep up with the good work. When's the next chappie up? update soon... :) 10/10
Author's Response: The next chapter is in the process of being written, so hopefully it will be posted soon :) Thank you so much for the review!!
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Originally left on 09/23/2006
i swaer no1 updates nemore!!! ELENA WERE R U??!!
Author's Response: Hi Jen, I'm sorry I haven't updated in a while. I'm busy with my wedding plans. I only have two weeks to go. I promise that my updates will happen as soon as I have the time :) Thank you for being such a loyal reader.
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Originally left on 09/20/2006
I Love your take on this part of the HP era keep up the excellent work !!
also is there some way i can be added to your list for updates if you have one thanks
owlyone@telus.net
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, unfortunatly I don't have a mailing list. The best way to find out if I have updated, is add this story to your favourites :)
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Originally left on 08/30/2006
Look! I'm here! I'm all caught up!!!! How long's it taken? couple of months? But I made it!! :D *dances*. You know, I'm sat here reading and reviewing this when i should be writing my chapter :p . But anyway, I'm liking this chapter, it was a very good follow up to the last one, and now of course I get to tell you to update :D .I really liked the little argument between hermione and ginny, especially when Draco attempted to go up there and the other two stopped him, that was particularly good. I thought you could maybe have extended what Ginny was saying, but I loved Hermione's reaction to the pillows. Now I wonder what Draco's surprise is, see i get to the end finally and there's still questions to be answered! *glares* ;) . Anyway, I enjoyed reading this, and I really liked this chapter :) .
Author's Response: Yay!!! Your all caught up now :) Well, now we can encourage each other to update, unless of course your busy :)
I had initially planned on ginny to continue ranting, but I found myself making her babble...lol..So I just left it where it is...lol..yes, more questions and surprises, but there are only a few more chapters to go, then this fic is done :)
I'm glad you liked this chapter, it was supposed to lift the mood a bit as whats to come next is well, happier :) The majority of the drama is over and waiting for the sequel.
Again, thank you for all your great reviews and sticking through this story :) I hope you keep reading as the chapters get updated.
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Originally left on 08/29/2006
woah, tis all happeninng now huh? But at last I know about the prophecies!! They were nicely written too, btw. And I liked how you made everyone fit in, their little group. I'm especially interested in Ron choosing her fate, wonder how that one will work out.Oh, and it must be said, I was right!! :D Aout Hermione I mean *smug*. Will be interesting to see if she comes to accept this news or tries to fight, I like how she stood up to Dumbledore and went agasint her normal character. Great chapter :) .
Author's Response: Yay!!! You made it :) Yes, its all happening now...And the plan always was to make them all fit in from the start...It just took me forever to get here...lol..
And yes, you were right...lol..But I didn't want to spoil the fun before it was time. I'm sure Hermione will get over it, but it may just take her a litlle more time.
Yes, her standing up to Dumbledore was a great changing point for Hermione. She is no longer a child, but an adult and as we grow, we change and so does Hermione's way of thinking.
I'm so happy you stuck with me on this fic. I know there is a lot of room for improvement here, but this is the story I'm most proud of :) So thank you!
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Originally left on 08/27/2006
ooo, nice shock there, and I liked how you wrote their reactions. Dumbledore coming as Santa was also very good, and I could totally see him doing that. I thought you wrote his speech very well too, very Dumbledore-ish :D .I liked the bit where Draco and Ron played chess, and also what Ron said when they reappeared *snorts*. It's going well really, and now I just need to find out about Hermione and the prophecies, 2 chapters to go! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you...I really freaked about writing Dumbledore. He is such a hard character and I really did want to get him right :) I lost it on Luna, and had to just make her OoC, so I'm glad you thought Dumbledore's speech was done well :)
lol..Yes, well thats Ron for you...the chess game is probably a bit cliched, but what a better way than to get old enemies, friendly??...lol..
Again, I thank you for the wonderful review and I can't wait to know what you think about the next one ;)
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Originally left on 08/27/2006
aww, such a fluffy chapter! ;) . But it's good, it was how it should be on Christmas, and I loved the present,s I was half expecting Draco to get her an ornament like what Hermione had given him to show her that he did want to marry her, but it came to the same effect anyway so yay :D .I really liked the twins in the beginning of this chapter and how they thanked Draco for the present, lol. So, is Hermione pregnant? That's my guess but I could be way off, I usually suck at guessing stroylines ahead of things *rolls eyes*.
Author's Response: Yes, Yes...A romance fic can't be a romance without the fluff...I love fluff...lol..
Actually, Draco's present for Hermione was inspired by the necklace set my bridesmaids are wearing :) So it seemed to fit in well with my fic.
Its so hard to write the Twins. They are so full of quick wit and pranks, and I'm just not good with that kind of stuff, so I'm happy you liked that part :)
Read on to find out about Hermione ;) Thanks for reviewing...Your getting closer now!!
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Originally left on 08/25/2006
Well I'm a little bit confused, didn't Ron do the attacking of Hermione before he knew of the prophecy? Or you mean, it just had to happen, and he found out why he did it after? Otherwise, I like how he explained all that, and especially Draco's punching him :p .I now really want to know more about the prophecies, and now that Hermione knows about them perhaps she will be able to help shed light on them, she is Hermione after all ;) . I'm glad they've made up properly now, and I loved how you wrote Molly in this chapter :D .
Author's Response: When I introduced Cassiel into the story, I never gave a background to how her and Ron met. But he has known for a while, which is why if you go back to that chapter, Ron is frustrated that Cassiel keeps showing him things about Hermione and Draco.
Yes, everyone wanted the punch, so they got it...lol...
Hmmm, keep reading...three chapters to go before you get to the prophecies :) And I love Molly, so I love writing her.
Thanks again for reviewing :)
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Originally left on 08/25/2006
I think we may have to have a word about all these cliffies, they're not healthy for the readers :p .Anyway, this was a great start to Christmas Day, I htought Hermione and Draco were a little too relaxed perhaps, like they should've been more awkward after a big argument, but as it's christmas i'm letting that one go ;) . Plus, I want to know what on earth Draco was doing!Interesting about the files, I like how you're blending the plot and the romance well, and now Ron's back! Can't wait to see how that turns out :D .
Author's Response: Cliffies are fun though ;)
I think my reasoning behind Hermione and Draco in this chapter, is they are both feeling sorry about the fight. Its not that they hold anger towards each other, but a lack of communication that they won't face. So, in light of the festivities ahead, they are putting on a 'front' :)
hehehe..well, romance is the main theme, but writting too much fluff makes me ill, so I had to throw in the mystery..lol..And yes, Ron's back :)
Thanks so much for the review, I'm glad you decided to keep going. I know your not that keen on Dramione fics :)
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Originally left on 08/25/2006
i feel like a total git, i read this a while ago and forgot to review but i swear i did write a review maybe another chapter , but great job and keep it up. update soon or i'll send my people to haunt u down . ok joking i'd give 10/10 for the great job but too bad 9/10 for making me wait. jokin its 10/10. i love this story.
Author's Response: lol...Thank you :) Updares are on the way, I promise.
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Originally left on 08/23/2006
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats all I have to say!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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Originally left on 08/23/2006
Good job! I very much enjoy this story but for some reason I can't stand it yet I continue reading. It is very odd. Well whatever good job! Keep it up. Thanx
Author's Response: Some stories are like that. I find myself reading many fics that I can't stand, yet I'm too far drawn into it to quit reading them :)
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Originally left on 08/22/2006
Hey Elena!!!!!1 I luv the story and i was wondering if u could help me with mine. So please e-mail me back. My e-mail is
kelly4draco@aol.com
Please e-mail me!!!!!! Thankx!!!!!!!!
P.S. When u e-mail me i will send u my story so far. ttyl
Author's Response: Thank you :) For any help with your story, you might want to try the forums. I'm Elena78 there.
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Originally left on 08/22/2006
Very good chapter. I understand that you might want to take a breather with a few chapters given that your pevious ones are so well thought out. Im thinking of doing the same with my story, what do you think?
Author's Response: Thank you :) Also, if you wish to discuss stories, try popping over to the forums, I'm Elena78 there.
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Originally left on 08/22/2006
This chapter helped lighten the mood from the previous chapter. I like the way Ginny think about the prophecy. She has 16 years with her daughter before Ron decides her fate. 16 years is a long time and every moment should be happy times, not sulking like Hermione. I wonder what's the surprise Draco has for Hermione and where he is going?
Author's Response: Yes, Ginny does have a better grasp on the prophecy. Hermione is the way she is because she always feels like nothing goes her way, no matter how hard she tries :)
As for Draco, you'll have to wait and see ;) Thanks for the review.
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Originally left on 08/21/2006
Hey Elena!!!! I love the story so far and i can't wait till you write the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hi there Kelly4draco, thank you for the lovely review :) Updates are on the way.
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