Name: FlamingQuilltips (Signed) · Date: 01 Jun 2017 10:43 AM · For: An Unlikely Proposal

Hey Claire!!

I'm here for our review swap! I'm intrigued by the summary already!! Not only is it Marauders, but it's got Sirius AND Marlene, and Wolfstar. This story can't get any better!!! 

I am only one paragraph in and I'm already loving the characterization of Sirius. Especially the part where his Black upbringing had made his guarded about his reactions - because that's exactly my headcanon of him!! He must have been so taken aback when Marlene figured it out. How did she, though? Does James know? Aaaaahhh So many questions! Sirius' reaction seemed so natural, startled, and wanting to run away. It's so in tune with the canon that we know of him. 

I'm kind of loving Marlene's  whole attitude here - her theatrics, bluntness, how she figured it out about Sirius, her discomfort while admitting her feelings about Emmeline. I'm guessing she probably cornered him at the library because that was where she would find him alone. I just feel so bad that they feel like they have to hide their true feelings though. But there's always a risk of heartbreak if the other person doesn't feel the same way. This little scene has made me so curious about what happens next. Is Remus gay too? Is he in love with Sirius too? I'd find it super interesting if Marlene wasbisexual and falls for Sirius later on! 

 

Are you planning to write a sequel or expand on this? I love this story!! Good luck with the challenge!

 

Much Love,

Ysh